Essay Beta Call

[author_by_night]

I'd like someone to look over a personal essay I wrote. You know those things you do as kids that either humiliate yourself, someone else, or both that everyone talks about for the rest of your life? I turned it into a four page story. :) I would ideally like it done by tomorrow or Sunday so I can make any edits I have to.

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