All of them are very clever but I liked the ending of the last one best- Despite every muscle pulled into an effort not to, Ginny began to cry. She couldn't stop herself; the tears poured as her shoulders shook.
Ginny was barely aware of the running water, the hand under the sink. She only realized she wasn't alone when a blonde girl started wiping her face.
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Date: 2010-04-08 09:13 pm (UTC)Despite every muscle pulled into an effort not to, Ginny began to cry. She couldn't stop herself; the tears poured as her shoulders shook.
Ginny was barely aware of the running water, the hand under the sink. She only realized she wasn't alone when a blonde girl started wiping her face.
"It's nargles, isn't it?" The girl asked.
Ginny was so confused, she stopped crying. "Huh?"
The girl smiled. "I'm Luna, by the way."
Well done!