I sense Cho butting into H/G's relationship sometime...or just be involved in the story in general.
“bludger short of a Quidditch match” -- This I don't get. I know it's supposed to be a substitution to another popular English saying but so far I can't come up with anything.
By the way, this irrelevant now that you've written the story, but since in the epilogue Teddy is saying goodbye to Victoire, I assumed she was still 17, and if Victoire's birthday was on the day of the Battle of Hogwarts then she'd have to be born on 2000 to still be going to Hogwarts at 2017. Small and irrelevant detail.
That aside, I really like this and can't help myself wanting more, because this is a nice invitation to your story. So more?
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Date: 2008-01-27 03:27 am (UTC)“bludger short of a Quidditch match” -- This I don't get. I know it's supposed to be a substitution to another popular English saying but so far I can't come up with anything.
By the way, this irrelevant now that you've written the story, but since in the epilogue Teddy is saying goodbye to Victoire, I assumed she was still 17, and if Victoire's birthday was on the day of the Battle of Hogwarts then she'd have to be born on 2000 to still be going to Hogwarts at 2017. Small and irrelevant detail.
That aside, I really like this and can't help myself wanting more, because this is a nice invitation to your story. So more?