Good one! This is, of course, coming from a person who probably wouldn't be able to write drabbles if her life depended on it, but I liked how short and yet how... deep it was. I liked Andromeda's pride in her family (yeah, I think one can safely call it pride). She IS a Black, after all! Blood runs thicker than water blablabla etc. :) The dilemma between family-love and the common view of that family must be/have been hard for Andromeda. It isn't helped, of course, by the fact that her own husband and daughter aren't the biggest Black-fans around...
Slight nitpick: the last sentence seems a bit off to me. I'm not quite sure why, but it appears to break the flow or something... Hmm. Then again, I have no idea what to replace it with either...
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Date: 2006-02-28 09:56 pm (UTC)I liked Andromeda's pride in her family (yeah, I think one can safely call it pride). She IS a Black, after all! Blood runs thicker than water blablabla etc. :) The dilemma between family-love and the common view of that family must be/have been hard for Andromeda. It isn't helped, of course, by the fact that her own husband and daughter aren't the biggest Black-fans around...
Slight nitpick: the last sentence seems a bit off to me. I'm not quite sure why, but it appears to break the flow or something... Hmm. Then again, I have no idea what to replace it with either...