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2014-07-13 11:09 pm (UTC)
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This is brilliant! I was teary in Andromeda's section--you encapsulated all the levels of drama in her family so well.
I love Hilary and her budding friendship with Lyall.
I completely LOLed at the following lines:
"I know what sex is," Lyall assured her.
"I should go, if Mum finds out I've spent Christmas Eve with some strange bloke I met while shoplifting, she'll have a fit."
Hilary started to leave through the window; Lyall considered telling her she could just use the door now, but decided to let it go.
Wonderful job! :)
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I love Hilary and her budding friendship with Lyall.
I completely LOLed at the following lines:
"I know what sex is," Lyall assured her.
"I should go, if Mum finds out I've spent Christmas Eve with some strange bloke I met while shoplifting, she'll have a fit."
Hilary started to leave through the window; Lyall considered telling her she could just use the door now, but decided to let it go.
Wonderful job! :)