http://thekaiserchief.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] thekaiserchief.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] author_by_night 2014-04-07 06:48 am (UTC)

"But things were almost normal again, and so Hestia was back to not really knowing what to make of Fleur Fleur was one of those people who had a very good heart, but it was underneath things Hestia didn't always want to touch."

Minor nitpick but there should be a period at the end of the sentence I bolded. Other than that, good chapter.

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