http://vifetoile.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] vifetoile.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] author_by_night 2011-03-24 09:45 pm (UTC)

Both of these were great. I loved your development of Zoe's relationship with her grandfather, and young, idealistic Mal. Poor pre-broken guy...

Also, "They would never leave Serenity Valley"... great.

And It was beautiful, especially the moment with River at the end.
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