ext_76975 ([identity profile] vegablack62.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] author_by_night 2008-10-28 10:19 pm (UTC)

I liked this, especially the lines "I... look at me, Neville," Hannah said. "Look at me.I'm chubby again... like her."

Neville frowned. "Like who?"

Hannah hesitated,and finally mumbled "younger Hannah."

"Why is that a bad thing?" Neville asked.

I thought that interaction was very true to character and also precious.

Also people don't have to be drop dead gorgeous to be in love or happy with each other.


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